Books to Movies: A Short Rest and a Great Setting

These posts examine the often necessary changes that occur between mediums: books to movies to radio drama. I am using Tolkien's The Hobbit and The Lord of the Rings to make my comparisons. 

"A Short Rest"

Three differences between the book and the movie:

1. The elves in the book and radio drama are mysterious, hidden, and whimsical, not noble irked warriors. Jackson took the elves from The Lord of the Rings as his baseline here, which I think was wise.
 
2. Galadriel, of course, does not show up at Rivendell in The Hobbit. But I appreciate her appearance in the movie. One of my favorite scenes is her interaction with Gandalf. As preparation for The Lord of the Rings, the various arguments made by all the parties--Saruman, Gandalf, Elrond, and Galadriel--is quite illuminating.
 
The appearance of Galadriel is not as unbalanced as it sounds. In fact, the Rivendell sequence is one of the most seamless, possibly because the action is confined to a single location. It brings together at least two of Jackson's arcs without much fuss (discoveries related to Smaug plus the problem of the Necromancer). It also explains why the dwarfs and Gandalf are temporarily separated.
 
2. In the book, the dwarfs don't protest Gandalf's decision to take them to Rivendell. In the movie, Thorin would prefer to avoid it.
 
The tension between Thorin and Elrond exists in the book and is generally well-handled in the movie. I especially get a kick out of the "intellectual" elves and the frat-boy shenanigans of the dwarfs. Aiden Turner, who could easily have been cast into either group, has such a boisterous, rowdy time as a dwarf, the audience is convinced, "Yeah, these are the guys to root for."
 
A note about voice overs. 
 
I generally vote against them. I think a movie is supposed to be a visual achievement. 
 
So...in the Rivendell chapter, Tolkien gets meta for a moment and comments that good times "are soon told about and not much to listen to; while things that are uncomfortable, palpitating, and even gruesome may make a good tale and take a deal of telling anyway."
 
Yet SHOWING those good times is necessary to establish what Bilbo misses and what the dwarfs are fighting for. And I will say--as comes up with Merry, Pippin, and Boromir--that Jackson exercises a skilled and light hand when it comes to "showing" good stuff. That is, he devises scenes that quickly convey that the dwarfs are a rowdy, happy group who stick together (preparing us for Thorin's later out-of-sync behavior) and that Bilbo likes Rivendell. Bilbo will naturally return there for his retirement.
 
The setting is really, honestly, something else. It achieves Miyazaki's "I want to live there" levels of enchantment, one of the best-conceived settings within both franchises. Kudos to the artists and designers!
 
But the action must continue--which involves the Misty Mountains and Bilbo's encounter with Gollum.

Books to Movies: Roast Mutton, Arcs, Cuts, and Pacing

The warg was named Daisy by Manu Bennett.
These posts examine the often necessary changes that occur between mediums: books to movies to radio drama. I am using Tolkien's The Hobbit and The Lord of the Rings to make my comparisons. 

"Roast Mutton" 

In the trilogy, the travel sequence from The Shire to Rivendell introduces Azog the Goblin, who is mentioned in the original text but does not make an appearance there. The idea is that the kingly hero--Thorin--needs a foe, so in the final movie, he isn't battling amorphous goblins but a clear antagonist. I don't consider Jackson's decision here wrong. For one, he relies on Tolkien's material, giving the dwarfs a history that stretches beyond this single adventure. (Moria will continue to haunt their story.) However, I never really got into the Azog arc. In terms of moving around events and providing background to the larger problem, I found the Necromancer plot far more engaging (more to follow).

The chapter, of course, focuses on the trolls who turn to stone, and the sequence is lovingly rendered in the movie. It is important for many reasons--for one, it has its own narrative arc. The radio drama also presents the troll arc with little extraneous narration/explanation. That is, the arc has the ability to stand alone. 
 
Jackson, as I've mentioned elsewhere, throws a lot of stuff into The Hobbit. He never forgets the most important Bilbo moments though in the text, Gandalf gets the trolls arguing rather than Bilbo. Still, the change from Gandalf to Bilbo makes for a nice character building moment.

The introduction of Radagast in this part of the movie I find somewhat distracting. However, the expulsion of the Necromancer does occur at this point in Middle Earth's timeline and accounts for Gandalf's behavior on several occasions. The importance of the twin events--expulsion of the Necromancer and confrontation of Smaug--is emphasized in The Lord of the Rings: Elrond and Gandalf and others saw Smaug and the Necromancer as two "fronts" that needed to be dealt with. Confining the Necromancer, Sauron, to Mordor was a stop-gap measure but a necessary one. 
 
It makes the entire trip far more political than the text initially argues--though the political element is there. 
 
But do the additional political elements make for a good movie? 
 
Flemish Giants
If one is going to create a trilogy, there have to be several threads going at once. Jackson has five: Smaug and the mountain, Thorin and Azog, the Necromancer (to which arc, Radagast belongs), Bilbo and the ring, Elvish dysfunctional family life. To his credit, he introduces all of these issues in the first movie although the Elves' dysfunction is mostly implied.
 
Generally, Jackson handles his multiple arcs better than Lucas though there is still some unevenness. I think one reason Jackson manages better than Lucas is that when particular characters are on-screen, he keeps his eyes on where their specific problem/arc will take them next. Lucas, aside from Star Wars IV, seems to get more easily sidetracked. (Film folks, generally speaking, are visually-minded. Lucas may be more abstract-painting-visually-minded while Jackson may be more Pre-Raphaelite-visually-minded: images for their startling effect versus images for the sake of story.)
 
Despite the need for multiple arcs, I'm not sure whether Radagast needed to be introduced so early. The dwarfs, Gandalf, and Bilbo manage to guide the entire first quarter of the movie without problems; their adventures establish that something has gone wrong in Middle Earth ("trolls coming down from the mountains").

The issue here is one of pacing. Tolkien, of course, handled his multiple arcs by telling a straightforward story and putting everything else into footnotes. But even when Tolkien delivers background information in dialog or with a quick paragraph, it is still less distracting than entirely switching scenes. I'm not sure film has a perfect solution here. 
 
Generally, Jackson relies on dialog--Gandalf mentions Radagast to Bilbo--to prepare for the cut. I'm not a huge fan of this approach, but I'm not sure exactly what else a director is supposed to do, other than throw in subtitles: Meanwhile, on the other side of Middle Earth...

Books to Movies: The Unexpected Party

These posts examine the often necessary changes that occur between mediums: book to movie to radio drama. I am using Tolkien's The Hobbit and The Lord of the Rings to make my comparisons.

"The Unexpected Party" 
 
All of the dwarfs in the movie are much more good-looking and heroic and rugged than in the book, where they are presented in serio-comedic ways. They are presented serio-comically in the Rankin animation, of which I am also a fan. They are also presented comically (they sound like Muppets)--at least initially--in the radio dramatization, with the exception of Thorin. 

I agree with the decision here to make the dwarfs heroes in their own right rather than clownish figures. Richard Armitage as Thorin glowers as much as book Thorin and has the same sense of his own dignity but more because he is a prince rather than a bombastic politician (princes are easier to like than politicians). As mentioned above, the radio dramatization also makes Thorin a kingly figure in his own right, being voiced by John Justin, a baritone with a commanding voice. 
 
To continue with the movie dwarfs, Kili is hot and Bofur is adorable. And Ken Stott as Balin is thoroughly impressive in his ability to look affable and then stern, rather like Mark Williams as Father Brown.
 
Again, I approve, in part because I like the idea of the dwarfs varying in terms of appearance and background. Just as humans vary considerably in appearance, so do all the other sentient species of Middle Earth. Tolkien wasn't one for pure essentialism (the elves, for instance, are quite distinct in their beliefs, appearance, art/architecture, attitudes, language, and politics). 
 
The dwarfs are also given distinct personalities which, in the book, they gain only incidentally, with Bombur being the most distinct followed by Balin (after Thorin, of course). The movie audience needs to engage with this group of 12+ characters immediately, and it is much easier to engage if they are not "ha-ha" characters--well, not all of them and not all the time. (Even the "ha-ha" characters are given distinct features: an axe in the head, excitable youthfulness, an ear trumpet.)
 
Martin Freeman as Bilbo is, of course, immediately engaging. I had a student who complained about him not being a stout, jolly figure (like Rankin's Bilbo), but other than de-aging Ian Holm, Martin Freeman as Everyman is about as spot-on a casting choice as one can get. (The radio drama engagingly presents Bilbo as a kind of Winnie-the-Pooh character who keeps interrupting the narrator.)
 
The opening scenes of the movie are close to the first chapter, even to the joke about Golf (which, yes, comes from the book). The humor is there as well as the haunting "siren-like" call to adventure. One of my favorite movie scenes is Bilbo leaning against his bedpost while he listens to the dwarfs' song. 
 
He does make the decision to go "on an adventure" himself--rather than being harried into the adventure by Gandalf. Without a voice over--which absence I also agree with--the viewer needs to see Bilbo make the decision, and with a slight turn of his head and curling of his hand, Freeman pulls this off. 
 
The radio drama, of course, relies far more on the voice-over, both by Bilbo and the narrator. However, even there, the voice-over and narrator are not too heavily applied. In fact, the radio drama brings home how "scene-ready" Tolkien's text is. It may not seem that way since it is fairly heavy on exposition. But story with problem starts the book. Story with problem continues it.  

In fact, Jackson COULD have started the trilogy with Freeman and Gandalf as many other versions do. But I appreciate the tribute to Ian Holm as Bilbo.
 
1931-2020


 

The Two Towers: Why The Ents Are Not as Annoying as the Ewoks

Essay Version:

Introduction (hook, context, thesis): What do Ewoks and Ents have in common? Ewoks are protagonists in The Return of the Jedi, one of the first Star Wars films. A fundamentally peaceful, woodland people, the Ewoks help the main protagonists outmaneuver and overcome the bad guys. The Ents, quite literally a woodland force (they resemble trees), supply equal help in defeating evil in J.R.R. Tolkien's trilogy, The Lord of the Rings. In both cases, these unexpected helpers turn the tide. The Ewoks, however, are far less believable than the Ents.

Body Paragraph (topic sentence followed by specific evidence): The Ewoks are unbelievable. They are cute and play clever tricks on the antagonists. For example, they use slingshots and other such devices to trick and tie up the Empire's stormtroppers. The Empire created a moon-size device that blew up a planet. Nevertheless, the audience is supposed to believe that cute and clever tricks can overwhelm and "outgun" the adversary. The suspension of belief regarding the Ewoks is too difficult to muster.

Body Paragraph (topic sentence followed by specific evidence): The Ents, however, are far more believable. The Ents go up against a corrupt wizard, Saruman. A force of nature, they destroy his dam and flood his compound, Isengard. In fact, they are galvanized initially by Saruman's destruction of their forest. In the book, specifically, they confer and come to a thoughtful and organized resolution: Saruman must be stopped. The Ents' patience and deliberate action makes them a formidable force demanding respect. 

Conclusion (restatement of thesis and points followed by a call to action): Although both Ewoks and Ents play important roles in their respective franchises and are also both linked to nature, Ents are ultimately more believable. The fact is, the sheer force of nature, from blizzards to volcanoes to floods, has played a role in human endeavors. Both Napoleon's and Hitler's armies came up against Russian winter and found themselves in less than advantageous positions. Some military historians believe that the English army won at Agincourt mostly because of English superiority with the long-bow but also because of the incessant rains. The ground was so muddy and churned up, the French horses never got up enough speed. They were taken out before their superior speed could reach the English lines (and this despite the English being fatigued and ill from those same rains). Cleverness is cute but the sheer impact of a blizzard on supplies or a flood on a home or a volcano on an entire mountainside makes nature a far more powerful force. The Ents not only use this force, they are this force. To find out more about Ents, check out Peter Jackson's second movie in The Lord of the Rings trilogy, The Two Towers, and read the source of inspiration, the book with the same title. You can find the book at the Portland Public Library and online at Powell's Bookstore.

Blog Version:

In both cases, a small force of innocent non-war-like beings go up against a powerful military force. 

The Ewoks are wholly annoying. They are cute and play clever tricks on the bad guys. Somehow the audience is supposed to believe that these cute and clever tricks can outwit and outmaneuver and "outgun" people who blew up a planet. 

Yeah, right. 

The Ents go up against Saruman. A force of nature, they destroy his dam and flood his compound, Isengard. 

And it's believable. 

The fact is, the sheer force of nature, from blizzards to volcanoes, has played a role in human endeavors. Both Napoleon's and Hitler's armies came up against Russian winter and found themselves in a less than advantageous position. 

Some military historians believe that the English army won at Agincourt mostly because of English superiority with the long-bow but also because of the incessant rains. The ground was so muddy and churned up, the French horses never got up enough speed. They were taken out before their superior speed could reach the English lines (and this despite the English being fatigued and ill from those same rains). 

And don't get me started on the problem of feeding an army! If weather keeps the food away...

Forget toilet paper--when a blizzard clears the local grocery store of all perishables within 24 hours, the message is clear: 

Nature don't care what anybody thinks. Supplicate it all you want. When the volcano blows...

Mount St. Helens, 1980


For the Fans: I Like Jackson’s Trilogy, Part I

The banishment of Sauron to Mordor: a scene
referenced in The Hobbit and LOTR, fully 
explored in Jackson's latest trilogy.
Considering how much money Jackson’s Hobbit trilogy has made by now, there are regrettably few people with whom I can share my love of the movies. So to any fans who might read this post, this is for you. (If you want to discourse on how awful it is, there are other websites!)

I like this movie--and Jackson's!
(I prefer "and's" to "or's.")
I recently reread the book (second time in a year; fifth or sixth time in my life so far) and was struck all over again by Tolkien’s plotting and perspective. The book is lighter in tone than the trilogy but not quite as light as criticisms of the trilogy often imply. If you are in search of that particular approach, I recommend the delightful Rankin production—it is a faithful adaptation, tightly plotted, with great songs!

Although aimed at children, the book itself is filled with dark edges. Nothing in the book reaches the sheer exhausting terror and despair of the Mordor chapters in The Lord of the Rings. However, even as a kid, I recognized the unusual anti-hero elements, not to mention the dramatic and shattering chain of events that lead up to the destruction of Laketown and the final battle. The book is remarkably political, a factor that Jackson captures well. Thorin’s fear that the mountain will be overrun by hoarders is justified. At the same time, the people of Laketown have rights to the treasure. The Elf King’s claim, though less meritorious (in the book and in the movie), still carries weight. Tolkien handles the resulting conflict with a deftness that belies its complexity—but the complexity is there.

Likewise, the lightness of Tolkien’s touch is not intended to disguise the greed, anger, fear, and self-interest of many characters. The Elf King is indeed "less wise and more dangerous [than the elves at Rivendell]."  Likewise, the Master possesses a cunning mind (as Baldrick would say). His conman-like assessment of Thorin & Company (it takes one to imagine one) permeates those chapters as they permeate the film, more than validating Jackson’s interpretation of Laketown politics. In fact (speaking of Baldrick), Jackson intelligently gives the Laketown scenes a Monty-Python/Blackadder feel and humor that is somewhat atypical for his films but perfect for the venue (and Stephen Fry). These scenes are very English.

Speaking of Laketown, Jackson is often criticized for adding to/expanding on the book’s material. Since nothing is eliminated, my response here is the same as Frasier’s:

“If less is more, imagine how much more more will be!”

That’s how I feel about the trilogy: Give me The Hobbit plus all the stuff referred to in The Hobbit and LOTR plus Tolkien’s extra material plus the invented stuff Jackson decided to throw in. I’ll take it all!*

Adaptations of a book to film can take several routes: the slideshow or strict rendering (boring), the interpretation (more interesting), the other viewpoint (fascinating), the make-a-place-for-myself (problematic but often insightful), and the “all we used was the title” (pointless). For instance, Howl’s Moving Castle is an interpretation and a make-a-place-for-myself, not a strict rendering. Yet nothing is lost. Hey, it’s Miyazaki!

LOTR, which I greatly enjoy, is an interpretation. With The Hobbit trilogy, Jackson gave himself permission to combine interpretation with another viewpoint (The Hobbit inside Tolkien’s larger universe) plus make-a-place-for-myself.

He had fun! And I am very grateful.

*Even Legolas’s superhuman abilities don’t bother me. In fact, I enjoy the barrel scene as one of Jackson’s few “less is more” action sequences. I’d rather watch a Spiderman leaping on people’s heads for five minutes than people mashing each other with swords for twenty. (Best action scene ever made: John McClane blowing up the building in Die Hard: no muss, no fuss, and it lasts about a minute.)

For the Fans: I Like Jackson's Trilogy, Part II

The final movie captures Bilbo's inner struggles.
Ultimately, the movies are an excellent showcase for Martin Freeman. Throughout the trilogy, Jackson delivers Bilbo's scenes with surprising accuracy (adaptations do involve change!). He is in the movies as much as he is in the book.

Bilbo’s presence in the book ebbs and flows. Tolkien's prose is smooth and unselfconscious: he doesn’t call attention to his own textual strategies. Because so much of the action is delivered through Bilbo’s eyes (Bilbo saw that the dwarfs had . . . ), the reader is left with the impression that Bilbo is doing more than he does in fact do. Many of the chapters use the third person plural almost exclusively: Bilbo and the dwarfs. They . . . Thorin and company . . .

Every place in the book where Bilbo rises to the fore in action, not just voice, appears in the movies. These instances may appear less because, well, more is more. But Jackson never forgets his protagonist. Not only are Bilbo’s scenes rendered, they are often “strictly rendered”: Bilbo and Gollum 's scene is transferred practically verbatim from book to film.*

It would be interesting to see a "book" version of the trilogy, one cut to just Bilbo's scenes (or those that affect him directly). Since all of them are there, the resulting movie might hold together surprisingly well. But then, of course, all the "more" would be gone! I am personally hoping that Jackson puts out a director's cut that expands the trilogy by several hours. My one complaint about Five Armies is that it ends too abruptly--I think Jackson was responding to criticisms that Return of the King had too many endings. Me? I want three or four endings!**

Returning to Bilbo, one major difference between the book and the trilogy is that we don’t hear Bilbo’s inner voice in those scenes where he rises to the fore—which one does with the book. I wonder if Jackson considered (and obviously discarded) a voice-over by Bilbo. If so, I imagine he found no need for it once he watched Martin Freeman on film.

Freeman’s physical acting makes a voice-over unnecessary. In the scene where Bilbo rescues the dwarfs from the Elf King's prison, Freeman conveys Bilbo’s exasperation and sudden confusion (“I forgot to get a barrel for me!”) through physical movement: the tilt of a chin, the hunch of a shoulder, the rise of a foot. But then film is—and should be—about what one sees, not what one hears.

So if you are tired of reading all the negative commentary online (and believe me, there’s plenty of it out there!), rest assured: at least one person loves the book and the trilogy!

--Slight Spoiler--

*In Five Armies, Bilbo’s decision to keep the Arkenstone, then pass it on to Thorin’s enemies plays as large a part as I had hoped it would. Despite the rapid sequence of events—Jackson is tackling multiple storylines at once—the movie conveys the difficulty and pain of Bilbo's decision (in fact, more time is spent on Bilbo making the decision than on carrying it out). The confrontation between Thorin and Bilbo at the gate after Thorin discovers Bilbo's "betrayal" is powerful although I favor the final scene between Bilbo and Thorin as heartbreakingly "true": both Richard Armitage and Martin Freeman deliver their characters' lines from the end of the book with gentle pathos and, in Martin Freeman's case, a boldly different interpretation: masterful performances by both actors.

**Interestingly enough, Five Armies is far more self-consciously thematic than Return of the King. LOTR is message or platitude-oriented: it is always darkest before the dawn; never give up; despair is the worst sin; the smallest person can change the course of history. Five Armies, however, ends with an uneasy peace (as does the book)--a difficult plot to platitudize.

The Mithril coat plus a discussion of values.
In many ways, Five Armies plays the same role in its trilogy as Two Towers except that Five Armies comes at the end of the quest cycle rather than the middle (hence the need for more endings). In a way, Jackson's decision to keep to the book here may have worked against the overall trilogy. I expected a more deliberate bridge of The Hobbit to LOTR; I surmise that Jackson pulled back to satisfy those who accuse him of "marketing" the movies and trying to capitalize off his success with LOTR. (This is a truly weird criticism: of course, Jackson is trying to make money off both trilogies! That's his job. Somebody has to pay WETA--the folks there can't work for free. Most readers don't have several million dollars floating around  with which to mount their own interpretations of Tolkien. Thank goodness somebody does!).

To solve the problem of Five Armies, Jackson threads it with a classic motif: by their fruits you shall know them - or - people show what they care about by what they argue, fight, and die for. Consequently, Thorin's speech to Bilbo at the end is not only a part of the book that had to be included (how I felt going in) but the capstone of a not-too-overly-didactic theme.

Extended Hobbit: The Unexpected Journey

The additional scenes in The Hobbit: The Unexpected Journey are fairly low-key. Rather than entire scenes of new information/action, they are mostly extensions of extant scenes. They don't alter the film overall; the cuts focus mostly on tightening the action (rather than fixing plot problems).

Rivendell and Bilbo:

The few additions that make an impact--in Rivendell, for example--underscore the dwarfs as the boisterous, low-culture boys' club that they are. I rather love this. Sure, I'd rather live in Rivendell with the elves. But I get a kick out of the anti-opera, anti-vegetarian aspect of the dwarfs.

The dwarfs in frat-boy party mode.
Overall, Rivendell contains the best of the extra scenes, including two neat thematic points: Bilbo's discussion with Elrond that emphasizes his choice between the comforts of home and commitment to Thorin & Company; the conversation between Gandalf and Elrond that hints at Thorin's grandfather's madness.

I regret the first cut more than the second. The second scene isn't paid off until the end of the trilogy; understandably, Jackson didn't want the audience to have to wait that long.

The first cut scene, however, includes a nice allusion to The Lord of the Rings. Generally speaking, I wish The Hobbit trilogy had contained more of these.

The first scene is also beautifully paid off towards the end of the movie with Bilbo's speech.

Of course, rewatching the movie served to remind me once again of Martin Freeman's impressive ability to convey emotion and humor with his utterly mobile face and easy body language. He doesn't simply recite words. He twists his mouth, ducks his head, avoids eye contact, then looks directly at his audience. Although sometimes quite subtle, the everyman humanity is there.

I can never say enough good things.

Orcs and Goblins: 

Other expanded scenes include the very funny under-the-mountain goblin additions, which are surprisingly close to the tone and plotting of the original text. One of the funniest lines comes here when the Goblin King says of a Rivendell nick-knack, “Bah – Second Age, couldn’t give it away!”

And if you think Tolkien wouldn't have approved, keep in mind that Tolkien is the one who invented Gandalf's golf line at the beginning of the book/movie: "[The goblin's head] sailed a hundred yards through the air and went down a rabbit hole and in this way the battle was won and the game of Golf invented at the same moment."

Love the White Warg!
Rewatching the film did remind me of something that always puzzles me with this genre: why do bad guys (the orcs) keep following a leader who kills them when they don't get him what he wants?

I have to admit, though, that people do this in real life! Look at Henry VIII. If a wife disappointed, he didn't just divorce or end her life; he ended the careers and lives of people connected to her: supporters, family members, advisors who recommended her . . .

And yet people kept trying to curry favor with Henry VIII by suggesting new wives.

People who covet power always think that THEIR bid for power will be different from all those other people who didn't quite make it.